Colloquium-(COLQ).md

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 ### Organization and presentation of the talk
 
-- As the presentation lasts for 15 minutes, you should have no more than 10 slides.
+- A presentation lasts 15 minutes. You should not have more than 10 slides.
 - To prepare your talk, have a look to 
 [Giving a great research talk](https://www.microsoft.com/en-us/research/wp-content/uploads/2016/07/How-to-give-a-great-research-talk.pdf)
-- Seeing as COLQ is a colloquium on your bibliographic study, precise bibliographical references (authors and year) should appear on your slides.
+- Since COLQ is a colloquium on your bibliographic study, precise bibliographical references (authors and year) should appear on your slides.
 
 ### Talk contents
 
-Your presentation should be able to be understood by someone who is not necessarily from the same field. It is therefore a good idea to outline the general framework of your subject, then the reasons why you chose your particular internship subject.
+Your presentation must be understood by peoples not necessarily from the same field. Therefore, it could be good idea (1) to outline the general framework of your subject; (2) to explain the reasons that led you to choose this particular internship subject.
 
-The next part of your presentation should set out the main ideas of the articles that you have read, grouping them together in a suitable way and structuring them clearly and logically. This part may be more “technical” but should not be beyond the understanding of the panel. Your presentation should not only include the works that will be directly used during your internship; you should rather give a broader view of the state of the art and motivate the works that will be used.
+The next part of your presentation should outline the main ideas of the articles you have read, grouping them appropriately and structuring them in a clear and logical manner. This part can be more "technical" but should not be beyond the understanding of the audience. Your presentation should not only include the works that will be used directly during your internship; rather, you should give a broader view of the state of the art and motivate the works that will be used.
 
-In your conclusion, you should situate your internship subject in relation to the various works that you have presented, explaining how you will attempt to address the aspect that interests you by basing your ideas on existing works and considering new solutions.
+In your conclusion, you should situate the subject of your internship in relation to the different works you have presented, explaining how you will try to address the aspects that interest you based on existing works and considering new solutions.
 
 ### Typical outline of a presentation